Hammad Got Chicken Pox (part two)

Last Thursday I wrote "Hammad Got Chicken Pox". One of my reader, Jerry gave some suggestions to improve it, so this is the new version ...

I just recovered from chicken pox, but my son Hammad just got it. Yesterday we saw some small 'chicken pox' on his body. I immediately took him to the clinic, but the doctor couldn't confirm it.Today my wife saw more 'chicken pox' on Hammad's body, especially at his face, and I took him to the clinic at 4 pm. They confirmed it, he has the chicken pox.. Fortunately the doctor told us it usually it is only take five days for Hammad to recovered, unlike me, who took 2 weeks. We hope Hammad will be fine soon. Please pray for him...

Thanks Jerry.